My entry is 6 sentences from my current work, HER RELUCTANT PROTECTOR. I'm in the process of revising the manuscript so I can resubmit it to an editor who would like to read it again. This story has a special place in my heart. It was the first full-length manuscript I truly believed had the potential to sell. Hopefully I'll kick butt on revisions and wow the editor into offering a contract!
So, what do you think?
Her gaze fell away from him. “Surely we can share a bed.”
Matt’s blood heated. Without
touching? Without pulling her into his
arms to smooth away the worry etched across her brow? “Sure.”
Nice snipppet. Can already see these two characters.
ReplyDeleteLovely six. Very intriguing - why are they sharing the bed? And the dilemmas poor Matt is facing - gold!
ReplyDeleteLOL Oh sure they can. Nice six and welcome to Six Sunday!
ReplyDeleteHe sounds like he already doubts himself. Nice six! And all the best with this story! :)
ReplyDeleteNice! I'd definitely read on!Best of luck with the revisions!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Six Sunday! This is a fun six and very steamy :)
ReplyDeleteWow, thanks, everyone! Yep. Matt's kinda doomed. LOL!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to 6SS! I hope Matt can keep his promise. ;) Fun six, Alexa.
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