
Last week, I introduced you to Quinn and his anxiety about searching out this woman who rocked his world. This week, we'll fast-forward to when they've already seen each other and now he's trying to convince her to....well, why spoil the surprise?
His fingers clenched, trapping her wrist on the counter and stirring her heart.
"Quinn, let go of me." Again she pulled her arm.
Still he held her tightly. With his eyes twinkling, he shook his head. "Not until you agree to a date."
So? What do you think? As I've mentioned, this is VERY ROUGH. I mean, I'm talking first draft rough. If you're so inclined, leave a comment for Meggie, Quinn and me. And, if you want to read more snippets, visit the Six Sentence Sunday website!
I really enjoyed that.. great first draft xx
ReplyDeleteOh, I hope she agrees. Nice six! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm with Jessica. Hope she's says yes!
ReplyDeleteI hope she agrees to the date!! Great six.
ReplyDeleteThanks, mrperfectsapprentice!
ReplyDeleteJessica, Jen and Layna, Quinn is quite the charmer and Meggie may be strong, but he'll wear her down. Which is EXACTLY what she needs!
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Forceful guy!
ReplyDeleteLOL, Taryn! He just knows what he wants...or thinks he does.
ReplyDeleteStirring her heart, nice. Say Yes!! pretty please :)
ReplyDeleteI'm with everyone. Hope she says yes...but makes him work for it a bit harder :D
ReplyDeleteS.J., Meggie won't want to give in, but she will....eventually.
ReplyDeleteMonique, he'll definitely work for it!
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Good six. Yes, have her say yes. I like when the man has to work for it.
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