Sunday, August 12, 2012

Six Sentences Of Fractured Paradise

Good morning! Welcome to another Sunday. Today, I'm sharing with you six sentences from my upcoming release, Fractured Paradise. It is a contemporary British romantic suspense and it will be released soon. The heroine, Rachel, has traveled to Sunderland, England to clean up her grandmother's cottage for the woman's return. Only, what she finds is not what she expects. The hero, Aidan Camden, wants to buy the cottage and is willing to do whatever he has to in order to get it.

This first scene I'm sharing with you is shortly after they've met. Rachel has been in the pub and Aidan has just walked in. Enjoy!


Camden took possession of the stool next to her despite all the empty ones along the bar.

She turned her head toward him.

Big mistake.

He fixed those hazel eyes on her and flashed a heart-stopping grin. “Hello again, Rachel.” Her name rolled off his lips like a sweet caress.

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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2012 at 4:04 AM

    great job will be coming back for more. Check out mines I'd love your input.
    http://www.soniawrites.com/2012/08/six-sentence-sunday-foreigner.html

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  2. Jessica E. SubjectAugust 12, 2012 at 6:43 AM

    Sounds like she's smitten with him. Great six! :)

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  3. Taryn KincaidAugust 12, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    Ah! The hazel eyes have it! Best wishes for a great release day!

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  4. Paula MartinAugust 12, 2012 at 10:13 AM

    It'll be interesting to see what develops between these two. Great six, and love her reaction of 'Big mistake'!

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  5. AlexaAugust 12, 2012 at 10:22 AM

    Thanks, everyone! Rachel and Aidan are my favorite characters! I'll be sharing more of their story over the next month or so!

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  6. Silver JamesAugust 12, 2012 at 12:26 PM

    Hahaha! I love her reaction and what a great hook to end the snippet with. I look forward to getting to know Rachel and Aidan better. Congrats on the upcoming release, Alexa.

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  7. sueAugust 12, 2012 at 1:11 PM

    interesting word use - take possession. Well done!

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  8. JennaAugust 12, 2012 at 1:34 PM

    Oh, and I can just hear his accent! Yummy! Bet she's in trouble now. LOL Great six.

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  9. AlexaAugust 12, 2012 at 4:25 PM

    Thanks, Silver! Sue, I hadn't even thought about the word usage when I put this up. Thanks for pointing it out! Jenna, oh yes, the accent gets me ALL THE TIME and they have a lot to go through before their HEA!

    Thanks for stopping by, everyone!

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